tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907684787754011591.post450962107158778371..comments2023-05-21T02:41:20.835-07:00Comments on The Naked Universe.: I IGNORED IT.....souravhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18385223728290456596noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907684787754011591.post-36215102698112531782008-02-11T00:15:00.000-08:002008-02-11T00:15:00.000-08:00nice writing!...but yeh..some words here and there...nice writing!...but yeh..some words here and there dint go well with the rest of the stuff..keep writing!<BR/><BR/>and i always love ur image-font color cominations..!S Ramanathanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10505695528989720706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1907684787754011591.post-83198050620573199692008-02-01T23:32:00.000-08:002008-02-01T23:32:00.000-08:00u conveyed ur feelings well.but thre wre a few lin...u conveyed ur feelings well.<BR/>but thre wre a few lines like " hosh and posh of this city"- this kind of usage doesnt sound well in a poem. u cud hav used some better words. thre is alwaz scope for improvement. isnt it?<BR/><BR/>otherwise the poem conveyed d mssg well and shows how reality is very much diff frm the wonderful world of dreams.Virajhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07849166608302488806noreply@blogger.com